Storyboard

First scene: In the first scene, it will show a person trying to use write with a random pen but then they realize that it doesn't work (dried out/out of ink). 

Second scene: Then we cut to a scene where a backpack is being opened and a Paper Mate pen is being taken out of one of the pouches.  


Third scene: For this scene, there will be a jump cut showing the continuous writing with our product. 


Fourth scene: This scene will have a montage of six pens getting in line side by side.  


Fifth scene:  The last scene will just show the logo for Paper Mate to finish the commercial off.  


*Each scene will have music in the background. 




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